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**Serrated Shadow** · 07-20-2007, 05:27 PM

Searching through myself, tryin’ to hook the Marianas of deep rhymes
But reachin’ farther each time, they surface shallower than sheet lines
Prolonging my illusion, I watch the sun in its seclusion
Knowin’ no matter how bright or long, our lives reach this conclusion
The Strongest Stars exchange fame for physical diffusion
Losin’ themselves in the limelight, eclipsed in their confusion
Then a different set of keys are dangled for America to paw at
While our Owner invents a new-fangled plan without a fallback
But Political Correctness keeps us fenced like lambs and hens
Instead of character, we’re represented by a camera lens
Ignoring the velocity with which our money’s subsidized
Supporting the atrocities our media never publicized
Defined by worth, we’re all separated by a rabid void
As our Mother Earth devolves to a cancerous planetoid
Eyeing a dark horizon, longing for time I once enjoyed
Hoping my son can rise and shine in the world that I destroyed

**falconstorm** · 07-20-2007, 05:37 PM

wow very powerful ss...

**falconstorm** · 07-20-2007, 05:55 PM

haven't been to the mike in a long time.
Hope that this star might shine.
I feel as the world is here for me to triumph.
But as I am about to succeed I get thrown back to
nose bleed.
So hard to get back up on the saddle.
Trying to fight every battle with one bullet
dodging every rock and stone.
Screaming to people I am here to defend my HOME..
I am willing to go and fight with anyone on the mike
defend my honor, taking hit after hit, I am use to
this sh!t.

**Serrated Shadow** · 07-20-2007, 05:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LpMq21

haven't been to the mike in a long time.
Hope that this star might shine.
I feel as the world is here for me to triumph.
But as I am about to succeed I get thrown back to
nose bleed.
So hard to get back up on the saddle.
Trying to fight every battle with one bullet
dodging every rock and stone.
Screaming to people I am here to defend my HOME..
I am willing to go and fight with anyone on the mike
defend my honor, taking hit after hit, I am use to
this sh!t.

yeah yeah that's what i'm talking about.

**falconstorm** · 07-20-2007, 05:57 PM

did you like it or give me sh!t?..LOL

**Serrated Shadow** · 07-20-2007, 06:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LpMq21

did you like it or give me sh!t?..LOL

nah, i liked it..pretty good for being off the top of your head.

**falconstorm** · 07-20-2007, 06:08 PM

yeah... I got some more..

I am here sitting working a 8-5 job
barely making ends meet.
Greeting every b!tch that in heat
Not one of them know my pain but oh well
lets here their sorrows...
I'm going to scream and I may come off
mean but deal with it I got a lot to say,
but I will save it for a rainy day.
Its hard living check to check, running out of
time, hoping I can make a quick dime.
Trying to stay on top the game hoping one day I will
never go down the drain...

**Serrated Shadow** · 07-20-2007, 10:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LpMq21

yeah... I got some more..

I am here sitting working a 8-5 job
barely making ends meet.
Greeting every b!tch that in heat
Not one of them know my pain but oh well
lets here their sorrows...
I'm going to scream and I may come off
mean but deal with it I got a lot to say,
but I will save it for a rainy day.
Its hard living check to check, running out of
time, hoping I can make a quick dime.
Trying to stay on top the game hoping one day I will
never go down the drain...

If that's not rep-worthy i don't know what is.

The-Hammer · 07-21-2007, 10:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Serrated Shadow

Searching through myself, tryin’ to hook the Marianas of deep rhymes
But reachin’ farther each time, they surface shallower than sheet lines
Prolonging my illusion, I watch the sun in its seclusion
Knowin’ no matter how bright or long, our lives reach this conclusion
The Strongest Stars exchange fame for physical diffusion
Losin’ themselves in the limelight, eclipsed in their confusion
Then a different set of keys are dangled for America to paw at
While our Owner invents a new-fangled plan without a fallback
But Political Correctness keeps us fenced like lambs and hens
Instead of character, we’re represented by a camera lens
Ignoring the velocity with which our money’s subsidized
Supporting the atrocities our media never publicized
Defined by worth, we’re all separated by a rabid void
As our Mother Earth devolves to a cancerous planetoid
Eyeing a dark horizon, longing for time I once enjoyed
Hoping my son can rise and shine in the world that I destroyed

When I can give you rep.. I will come back and rep this.

The-Hammer · 07-21-2007, 10:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LpMq21

yeah... I got some more..

I am here sitting working a 8-5 job
barely making ends meet.
Greeting every b!tch that in heat
Not one of them know my pain but oh well
lets here their sorrows...
I'm going to scream and I may come off
mean but deal with it I got a lot to say,
but I will save it for a rainy day.
Its hard living check to check, running out of
time, hoping I can make a quick dime.
Trying to stay on top the game hoping one day I will
never go down the drain...

Reped, that was amazing

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